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Naser Thailand

September, 07, 2008 4:30 PM

surprise surprise :D ma3jooga !

film is loading .

ola Jordan

September, 07, 2008 4:54 PM

What is the surprise? :D Let me know what you think when it finishes loading...

ياسمين حميد Germany

September, 07, 2008 6:21 PM

poor rasha!
how quick an idea spreads, just like a dandana
btw, who sings this song?

Naser Thailand

September, 07, 2008 6:29 PM

the surprise ino i saw ur request on mahjoob,but since i'm not really active there anymore i PMed a recommendation for a website :D the next thing i know someone is posting a short film w meen ma3joga :d denya z'3eereh.
its loading tooo slow .i watched half of it ,I'm trying to reload it now ,
notes so far :
the street noise is way too loud.at time i didn't know who was talking (the elevator scene) ,and sometimes i had to read the sub to understand :D .
2) the guys are wayyyyy too clean cut :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD i understand the enthusiasm though

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3) these are "falsafeh zaydeh comments" : a) the conversation between the grocery man and the girl ,the 1st part of it ,wut da heck was that :/ it was meaningless .- the part before the chocolate thing - and he didn't look old enough to be a 3ammo :d.

wut i like so far :
- the idea,i like it,brilliant .
- the camera angles and editing .
- acting was okay,varies .I'm gonna say good job everyone and of course you'll be better in the next video ,keep up the good work.

maybe i'llcome back for more once its done

ola Jordan

September, 07, 2008 7:00 PM

Naser: Thanks for the feedback, I agree on the street noise but let me tell you that we were using a simple malfunctioning digital camera :D

About the supermarket scene, first, she sisn't call him 3ammo she asked: keef 3ammo. Second, I assure you it wasn't meaningless, it was meant to show that she was a good and friendly girl. Well, in a very short retrospect this sounds like explaining details in a way that ruins the movie :s anyway... besides, if you think about it htis way you'll find everything meaningless! Why? because the dialogue in the first half of the movie wasn't the idea. It was actually the dandana and the dialogue was collateral...

Yasmine: The singer is called Haytham Shomali! someone new...

fawzi
September, 08, 2008 12:26 PM

not bad. keep'em coming.

Naser Thailand

September, 08, 2008 4:51 PM

technical error .
The sound wasn't clear thats why i didn't hear it right

and btw i couldn't hear half of wut he replied :/

and let me assure you,you don't need to explain to me lol,like "the idea in the 1st part wasn't the dialog" :D I wasn't criticizing for the heck of it ,I left a long detailed comment because i care .

still won't fully load *bangs his head against the wall*

drefaie Jordan

September, 22, 2008 12:25 PM

I cudnt watch it here, cuz the ikbis player takes forever to load :S y dont u use youtube?

yet i watched it on facebook and it's great!

mu tabi3i il nas shu zemmet-hom was3a!

:thumbs up:

oeliwat Jordan

September, 23, 2008 9:47 PM

Thanks Dania, glad you liked it

I couldn't use Youtube because it doesn't allow vidoes that exceed 1o minutes in lenght

drefaie Jordan

September, 25, 2008 9:47 AM

aha sa7 fi size limit